तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
नाम!!
क्या वे,
हमारी सच्ची पहचान हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
रंग!!
क्या वे,
हमें बराबरी से बाँट पाते हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
लिङ्ग!
जो की,
भेदभाव को जन्म देते हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
देश!!
जो हमें
राष्ट्रीयताओं में बांटते हैं?
तुम कौन हो,
मैं कौन हूँ?
वर्ग!
जो भावनाओं को,
आर्थिक आधार पर बांटते हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
रक्त!!
हाँ, तुम्हारा सुर्ख़ है,
मेरा भी बिलकुल सुर्ख़ है।
अब कहो,
तुम कौन हो!
और
मैंकौन हूँ!
क्या मैं तुम नहीं?
और तुम मैं नहीं?
मोहब्बत!!
क्या यही सिर्फ,
एक सच्चाई नहीं?
PS: My dear friend Gourav Anand Shabd Ragini translated my poem who?? In Hindi, and it came out more beautiful than the original.
In respect of that I am
Posting it on my blog.
Thank you so much my Friend. I am honoured.
Haha… nice translation to a lovely poem. I dont read hindi poems much, but this one felt nice❣
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Indeed. Gourav did a brilliant job.
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Formal 🤓
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Wow!!
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Thank you
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Awesome!
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Wonderfully written dear ❤️❤️❤️
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Credit goes to Gourav.
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Amazing!!!…loved it …..Gaurav you nailed it in Hindi.
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He did indeed 💜
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🙏तुम में भी मैं और मुझमे भी तुम ,और हम से ही सबकुछ।
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Thank you so much for this ❤️
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😊
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Bravo…brilliant job❤
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🌹🌹
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Yes sounded beautiful in hindi. Aap pal do pal ki shayaar ho aur hum pal do pal ke paathak
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☺️☺️
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Who are you?
– you are awesome😉
Who are you?
Gentle ; patient and loving 😉
And who am i?
…….I even dunno😂😂
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You are a sweetheart ❤️
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😉 word is suitable for you😉💓💗💖
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Ambidextrous that’s the word which suits you to perfection. Whatever you are doing just leave and concentrate on writing. You are one of the best that I have ever read or known. In the anals of history boks you might go down as the best ever.
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These praises should be given to Gourav who translated this in Hindi.
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He is also a terrific writer but I was most impressed with the thoughts . Those thoughts were so profound. Your name is going to be written with indelible ink in the literally field.
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Wow!!! That’s a lot!!! Thank you so much 💞
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Thank you priya!! And sorry i had forgot to name the title. “तुम और मैं” good one 👌👌 😊😊
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A big thanks to you Gourav.
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Yeah, you are correct, got the edge. The feelings and and emotions is there. A poem methink must in them the writers soul.. And produce emotions or thoughts.
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Indeed. My friend there did a brilliant job ☺️
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Awesome & impact-full translation!
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Indeed. Gourav is very much talented ☺️
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Totally, hats off to him.
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Totally !!
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So pretty…
Hugggs
Suzette
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Thank you ❤️
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Thank you sharing… : )
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