Who are you?
Who is me?
The names?
Are they
Our true identity?
Who are you?
Who is me?
The colour?
Does that
Separate us equally?
Who are you?
Who is me?
The gender?
That let
People treat discriminately
Who are you?
Who is me?
The Countries?
Dividing
Us nationally.
Who are you?
Who is me?
The class
Distinguishing
The feelings economically
Who are you?
Who is me?
The blood?
That is red
Same red completely.
Then who are you?
And who is me?
If I ain’t you
You aren’t me?
The love?
Isn’t it
The only truth
Logically.
Beautifully written ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome 🙂
LikeLike
Nice one…deep
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful! When will people finally realize that?
LikeLiked by 1 person
I wish soon
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow!
LikeLiked by 1 person
💜💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Our individuality and unique gift to be discovered through t8me and experience. Beautiful
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you love ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Loved the English version as well
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you love ❤️
LikeLike
Most welcome dear ❤️😘
LikeLiked by 1 person
😘😘
LikeLike
❤️
LikeLike
Powerful questions..beautifully crafted
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much ☺️
LikeLike
Sometimes I joke that my parents may have raised me in America but they accidentally raised me Confucian. They push academics instead of athletics, public service over personal profit, and companionable gender relationships rather than the roller coaster romances that are only likely to work out in TV or in books.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully penned. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much ☺️
LikeLike
You’re welcome.
LikeLike
Read this after the hindi one. Both read good in its own way.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Ravi ☺️
LikeLike
this is logically correct at so many levels. these question are the question we should often ask ourselves.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Agreed. And answer them too logically.
LikeLike
Awesome! Love how your words ring truth. So simple yet so powerful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much ☺️
LikeLike
Evolving and shining are your words! The Priya we adore. Sweeter than a donut swimming in molasses.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww!! Diana you are the sweetest.
Your words are mellifluous. ❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
One of my favourite words! Smiling and blowing a kiss from over the ocean 😘
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hugs and kisses back ❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
So much to contemplate and you expressed these thoughts beautifully ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
I tried M!!
LikeLike
Succeeded
LikeLiked by 1 person
Now I am ☺️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice reading your poem Priya😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Logically Fantastic ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much dear Faceless. ☺️💞
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Lost Soul 🤗
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lost soul is Priya ☺️☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
नाम!!
क्या वे,
हमारी सच्ची पहचान हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
रंग!!
क्या वे,
हमें बराबरी से बाँट पाते हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
लिङ्ग!
जो की,
भेदभाव को जन्म देते हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
देश!!
जो हमें
राष्ट्रीयताओं में बांटते हैं?
तुम कौन हो,
मैं कौन हूँ?
वर्ग!
जो भावनाओं को,
आर्थिक आधार पर बांटते हैं?
तुम कौन हो?
मैं कौन हूँ?
रक्त!!
हाँ, तुम्हारा सुर्ख़ है,
मेरा भी बिलकुल सुर्ख़ है।
अब कहो,
तुम कौन हो!
और
मैं कौन हूँ!
क्या मैं तुम नहीं?
और तुम मैं नहीं?
मोहब्बत!!
क्या यही सिर्फ,
एक सच्चाई नहीं?
LikeLiked by 3 people
Oh my god!!!!!!
Love love love this❤️❤️❤️
I wish I could write in Hindi, I will definitely try😉💞💞
Thank you so so much. I feel honoured.
LikeLike
Got it!! Thank you ☺️
LikeLike
We are just people with different liking and disliking may be this is what we are and what separates us.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Agreed
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully written ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ☺️❤️
LikeLike
Very nicely done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You know priya.. every time i finishes one of your poem.. i can sense a smile spreading on my lips.. and it leaves me guessing “isn’t these are the lines which you were also thinking about”
Beautiful.. 👌👌
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow!!! Thank you. I am glad we share similar thought process. And reading your comment made me smile too ☺️💞
LikeLiked by 1 person
I couldn’t resist my self to feel it in hindi.. hope you would like it.😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am posting it on my blog, acknowledging you. Hope you won’t mind it ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Can’t be more happy😊😊 !! And Its your poem.. just language is different.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
your poetry makes a lot of sense 🙂 from where have you got such thoughtful brain??
someone has correctly said there are real beauty with brains like you ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awwww!!! I just try searching for answers.
Love your compliment 😉❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is brilliant! Good conclusion, and great questions.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
Still finding answers, all of us.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes. Even when we have answers, they are often the answers NOW, not THE answers.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly !!
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly, love actually connects us with every so called real objects,people,living beings. And makes life more lively.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It does. Thank you for sharing your thoughts 💞
LikeLiked by 1 person
Coincidentally one of my friend has released his song today titled ‘Main Kaun Hoon’, if you are interested then could share the link.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow!! Sure
LikeLiked by 1 person
Here it is
LikeLike
LikeLike
It seems that link is getting into your spam folder. Please do check.
LikeLiked by 1 person
If only I know the spam folder in WP
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha…Click on wordpress symbol at top left hand corner, then down there you would find ‘comment’ section, here check pending or spam comment section.
LikeLike
M just seeing ur beautiful DP without blinking my eyes 😍😘💙💜
LikeLiked by 2 people
Guilty too but logical piece ,I like
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha!! Thank you 🌹
LikeLike
Honestly you a craft with beautiful brains
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much for this ☺️
LikeLike
You Welcome tata
LikeLiked by 1 person
☺️
LikeLike
Haha!!! Read the piece 😁😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes reading 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
haha…same here ❤
LikeLiked by 2 people
Awww thank you baby girl ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just humanity wherever love comes along with it there comes pain ; anger ; feelings and attachments.
These are main cause of suffering.
And if a person isnt well by heart and soul then it’s only flesh hung on sticks .
So no love just humanity😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Agree with your thoughts. Love and humanity exist together according to me ☺️
LikeLike
They don’t 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
I respect your perspective 🙏🏻
LikeLike
Good night sweet dreams😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good night.
LikeLike
💞
LikeLike
And ya don’t mind my arguments its been a year im growing argumentive . Im trying to overcome it .😇
LikeLiked by 1 person
Not at all sweety. We all have our own perspective regarding things.
LikeLike
😇
LikeLiked by 1 person
I respect that.
LikeLike
Thanks 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
No love just humanity
LikeLiked by 1 person
Logical..😉 liked it👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
It is. Thank you ☺️
LikeLike
You’ve hit on a Valid question there. Very good. ☺
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. I guess we all need to find out the answer ☺️
LikeLike
But will we ever is it frustratingly rhetorical?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Biggest question.
LikeLike
Wowwww just wowwwww 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you ☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like this! Very abstract
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Braeden 🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome
LikeLike
Who Knows?☺☺☺
LikeLiked by 2 people
Haha exactly 😉
LikeLike
…. And that’s a beautiful, yet logical Abstract 😊😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am glad you liked. Thank you ☺️
LikeLike