Tall
Dark eyes
Darkest of hair
Tanned skin
Toned body
The dashing personality,
A complete combo
Smart and witty
Another name of perfection
Sensual
The Eros
The god of seduction
Unique Charisma
Charming Enigma
But they fear him
The people
They bow
More of fright
Than courtesy
For he is the Boss
The king
Oh but itโs not
As they all see
They just look
Donโt observe
Behind that enigmatic face
Hides a small boy
Yearning
Affection
Desiring love
A motherless child
Drunkard father
Exploited and abused
He killed the one
Two three and four
He who became
A murderer
A power
Creating a world
They call underground
Though he still
Carries a rose
For he still have
A heart
Still cloaked
And an innocence
Till not found
Beneath that gun
He carries
They think him a nightmare
He still dream of Fairies
Ladies and Gentleman
Here he comes
A soul forlorn
Unrevealed under the vicious Skin
Meet
Jasper โThe Black thornโ Klein.
The lost soul.
PS: This is the first time I have tried to write about an imaginary Character.
So, now I have completed your first triptych about Jasper. I don’t think he will ever lose his love for women. He will be completed, when he is reconciled with his fellow men.
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Letโs see whatโs in store for Jasper. Thank you so much โค๏ธ๐
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Read all the three abt the black Thorn, prequel, sequel everything and it was just brilliant
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Thank you Anamika โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Welcome
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glad to read its prequel first or else i won’t have grasped the actual scenario behind the scenes. it’s written with such a therapeutic suspense of one’s life with suchness of constructive thoughts, i guess. very smoothly penned! nice to see u getting ur hands more dirty at writing, & tryna something new.
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Thank you.Thank you. And love โค๏ธ
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The dark world opens the door for the bright ones.
It’s really awesome, waiting for the sequels to appear ๐
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I am trying Kalyan, letโs see how much life I could give to our Jasper.
Thank you so much. ๐๐
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Would be awaiting, you’re welcome. ๐
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Really good. Is he inspired by anyone in real life?
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Nope. I was just given this name by a friend. To write on him.
I fragmented his life.
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It’s a great visualization then of a fictional character
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I am trying to work on it more.
Thank you.
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looking forward to it
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Thank you for such encouraging words โค๏ธ
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Anytime
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I do love hm too!
Great character outline in poetic form
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Thank you so very much.
I am glad.
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I’m already in love… Please feed me more of Jasper:-)
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Awwww
I will work on it more Akeela.
Much love โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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That is Daniel day Lewis as Daniel Plainview in There will be blood. one of the greatest actor of our time.
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I don’t know well who that is ๐ But I am glad you found that.
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oh you just took a random picture from internet?
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My friend gave me that and asked me to write a poem about it. ๐๐
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Hey Priya, may I steal your Jasper. I am in love already. I promise to keep his rose safe and nurtured ๐
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Awwww โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Hehe๐
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Your description of this individual was so vivid, I had to do an online search to see who he was! Now that, young lady, is a feat! Bravo!!
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Oh my!!! That’s best compliment I could ever get Diana! Want to come over and give you a bear hug โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Oh thanks Priya! I’ll be waiting at the airport haha *mwah*!!
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It may come true, soon ๐๐๐
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I recommend falling in love with an international airline pilot and travelling with him very often, especially to Canada! ๐
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Haha!!! ๐๐๐๐
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You are blossoming! โค๏ธ
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Thank You ๐น
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OMG…the description is haunting and addictive ๐๐๐๐
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And your comment is amazing as usual! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Good one lost soul!! You are improving by the day. I am so proud of you
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Thank you sir ๐
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You are welcome Ma’am. ๐๐
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Hail to Jasper Klein! A great take on gangster genre! Totally loved it. And ofcourse hail to the Lost Soul too.๐ฒ๐๐ฐ๐ซ๐ซ
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Awwwww you are sweetest โบ๏ธ
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Well, I would give credits to your poems โฃ
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The character may have been imaginary, but the feelings, the emotions were more than the truth I know.
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Thank you Moushmi, well indeed, we often judge the book by its cover, whereas there may be a hidden treasure inside.
Thank you so much โค๏ธ
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And in most cases, there always is a treasure.
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True that! ๐
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You missed some of my posts ๐๐๐
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Really? When?
I think I am really messing up my blog these days.
May be you could attach any particular link here?
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https://priyasingh91.wordpress.com/2017/10/31/desire/
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Lol which one? Hmmm? ๐
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Lol
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Beautiful description.
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Thank you Rajneesh.
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I think you did a great job with it! โบ๏ธ
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Thank you so much โบ๏ธ
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Great post dear ๐๐ Very well written x x
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Thank you โบ๏ธ
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You are most welcome dear ๐๐๏ปฟ x x
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