Sitting shattered and battered
Tears trickling through my eyes
I heard someone calling out
A soothing whisper
Telling me to stop crying
I looked and found none
Then I heard within
My heart goes out for the moment
To that sweet innocent soul
Who wanted to make me whole
Then the hailstorm of reality hit
And I hush and said Ssh
No more talking
I said firm
To her or him?
I don’t know
Nor I will know ever
Like an unknown
A flower with no name?
The one who planted left
Long ago, gone.
Oh my sweet child
The one left me
And us.
I am scared
Afraid and tortured
I can not
No I can’t
Carry you my angel
Not now not Beyond,
You will have to go
I am here
In this tornado
Getting rid
Of my shadow
Forgive me
I am about to commit
A heinous crime
Please oh lord forgive me
For I am about to sin
Crushing
Battling myself
Murdering the little flower
Oh my sweet Darling
You and I
Aren’t meant to be
Like him and me,
This blizzard is approaching
My heart is pounding
I want to
I do
To hold you in my arms
To caress you
To love you
And to kiss you
To keep you close in my heart
But I will have to loose you
And I am losing
With each passing
Moment
Losing a piece of me
Forever
His broken promises
Are breaking us apart,
Oh but my littlest angel
We will meet
I swear
In the next life
Of yours and mine
I am sorry
Forgive me
I apologise
For doing this
Hideous immortality
This twister
Is taking away
You from me
And me from within
Everything
I remain with nothing
This Avalanche
Finally killed
The blossom
And there released
A sigh
Of immense hurt and pain
From my Bosom.
PS: This is a serious issue I tried writing about. I don’t know how much I did justice to it but I just poured out what my heart said to me.
The Lost Soul.
The poem is well written….Anyone in depression can relate to this very well.
and the lines of hope in between do give some comfort.
“Oh but my littlest angel
We will meet
I swear
In the next life
Of yours and mine”
The only hope when your loved ones leave you.
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Though I wrote this on a different context,
I like your take as well.
Hope you are fine Akanksha
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I am not fine and this is what is getting reflected now in whatever I write. My recent blog will tell you my mental state. I am just seeing negativity and hopelessness all around me.
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Dear Akanksha, I have been through this phase trust me. It’s hard to hold on I know. But we have to. We need to. Of course I won’t understand the pain you are going through. I won’t even try to. I will though say this to you to keep on holding the rope. Things will be fine.
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So well written 🙂
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Thank you Dear for stopping by ☺️
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My pleasure. 🙂
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That poem was beautiful
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Hi thank you for stopping by and giving time to appreciate. Means a lot.
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Heart breaking 💔 😥
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Stunning my love.
Missed you. Hope you know who this is 😘
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M! 😍😍😍😍😍😍
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💜😘
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Oh i missed you so so so so muchhhhh 😘😘😘😘
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Me too. I’m here,though. A little bit quieter than last time but longing to write and read your words and others I’ve missed 🦋🔥
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And stay here. ❤️❤️ Love.
I am doing a little dance 💃🏼💃🏼
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Missed your sweetness 🦋❤️
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I missed everything about you so much. 💝😍😍💝
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😘🦋
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😢 no words lov
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Thank you sweetheart
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Most welcome dear 😘
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Love 🌹
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❤️❤️❤️
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One of the best thing which I encountered today 👍
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Hi Abhay, Thank you so much.
I don’t know how but found you in my spam 😉.
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Oh! Well.. I thought that the Lost Soul may have been lost in Spam, so I would be conspicuous there😉
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Haha that was so nice of you, and see I found you there 😁😁
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😊
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Very powerful and intense 💜
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome 💜
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Brilliant poem. 👌Well penned . Heart touching nd you portrayed emotions so well.
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Thank you Shayra.
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Welcome dear😊
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Glad to know that you are also a teacher.
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Oh wow are you as well?
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Yes, just want to know how u manage writing as well
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Here I am am dear one. Waking up at night. 😁😁 writing and reading.
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Yes, yhi time niklta h for reading nd writing but morning school so jldi sona padhta h . Still, if u have any tips to manage both. Then happy to learn from u
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Oh I hardly am able to manage. But yes I have make it a habit to write something everyday. I don’t post all here. I just can’t sleep
Without writing something. So if this is what you really want, things will be managed📚
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Thats a good idea. Nd I have read somewhere k if if we write daily , then in 3 years we can be a good writer. Thanks , I will also try to make it a habit
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Oh really? I didn’t know that. Thank you for sharing. Yes. It does wonders for me. An escape. A solace. The day when I can’t write anything, I toss and turn and then I have to have open my journal. 😂😂
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That’s really good. Vaise I was thinking to write a diary but it took long time for bringing it to action. Nd now I will write diary. It will keep me connected
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Yes. You should start. Don’t leave on tomorrow. Start right now.
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Yes, okk. I will write from today
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Yes write about a new friend you just made 😂😂 and how she is such a wonderful blogger 😍😍😍
Haha just kidding!! Write your heart out. All the best.
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Welcome dear. No, u r right I can write about my new blogger friend from same profession. Keep inspiring me to manage writing. Good night dear😊💝
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A very good night 😘🌹
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The rhythm within this piece is amazing! I could really feel the rhythm speed up after the line; ‘I call you my angel’
(Or something similar to that)
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To carry you my angel.
Thank you Elle , I appreciate you stopping by.
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Beautiful
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Thank you
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Are you still a lost soul?
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I am yes, still looking out for some answers.
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Some answers are found within.
Some answers are found with change and perception.
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And some I got,some are still left.
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I’m sure
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Hope you are doing fine.
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I’m ok – you too
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Yes Partly I am.
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Good
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This poetry is inspired. Beautiful beyond words👏
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Thank you Shivangi for stopping by. Thank you so much
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Your ability to paint emotion with words is stunning. I am filled with goosebumps, my heart pounds and my stomach is filled with sadness. You more than did justice in this piece for you captured perfectly the intensity of overwhelming emotions in making a decision like this. I am just wowed here!!!
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This means a lot to me coming from you who is such a great writer. I am much honoured. Thank you so so much. I myself was feeling overwhelmed with pain and emotions and the outcome was this.
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You are most welcome. Personally, I think some of the best poetry comes from pain and hurt. I hope writing it away helps ease the pain and flood of emotions.
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Absolutely.
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🙂
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Actually i wanted to write this as – has to be one of your best.
some say to a certain days it can’t be called as a life instead some bological thing.
i think the best way to view is life is from god, so we have no right to do abortion.
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I agree with your thoughts. Thank you for reading. But yes sometimes the things which one do is not what they really want.
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Also i am in noway justifying god, if i met him in person i have lots of ‘why’ questions to ask him 🙂
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Yes we all have I guess.
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Powerful, intense and heartfelt! Well done, Priya, one could feel the pain and the pull
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Thank you Kunal.
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Beautiful
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Thank you
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I feel through these words, like a soul sitting alone, clutching oars, in a boat on a perilous sea. Your storm words toss me around and the wood cracks as my emotions fracture. Keep raging: sometimes great writing has us all holding on for dear life. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you Diana. I was drowned in emotions while writing this. And I believe you felt those emotions too.
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😘 Hugs dear one.
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Yes I needed them precious 😍😘
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Some days will be diamonds, some days crumbling rocks. Hang in there sweet stuff! 🍯💖💖💖
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Yes honey bee 😍
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Very beautiful and very powerful!
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Thank you 💜
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Yess, so true, I hope humans understand. Giving a life will never harm anyone
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I wish that too but sometimes there are some shackles that aren’t visible.
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Heart touching
Nothing more to say
Well written priya
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Thank you Ann.
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Beautifully and sensitively rendered poem on a very emotional subject!
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Thank you So much
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My pleasure, you did good !
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🌹🌹
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Yes it is a sin. A heinous murder…
Excellently presented dear. Very powerful as someone said above. Keep it up.
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Thank you
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👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Thank you Christopher
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Always!
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Well-written xx
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Thank you Soiba.
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Wow Priya, this is such a great work. This poem held me spellbound. You have brilliantly covered this issue.
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Thank you. I felt a tinge of pain while writing this.
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And we all could see your pain in your writing. This is wonderful.
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Thank you Raj. 💜💜
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It’s my pleasure Priya.
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Heart touching. .👍
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Thank you D!
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Oh Priya… My heart bled from this touching emotional poem… You called up pain I didn’t know I had, you’re an amazing writer, and don’t ever doubt that. I’m in awe of you right now. 😔😍❤
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I am in awe with precious words you said sweetest friend. Thank you so much. ❤️❤️
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Your writing is touching and profound in everything you attempt! I love it. And you! 😊
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😍❤️
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❤
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Much love ❤️❤️
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And much love returned. 😊❤❤
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❤️❤️❤️
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😚
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the amazing poetry by a talented poet.
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Thank you for the Reblog 💝
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You are welcome my friend.
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Amazing job dear Poet. Your words. Honest, true and worthwhile.
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Thank you John.
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You are welcome my friend.
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Try…👍👍..
@priya
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So nicely written..Ur writing skills and painting completely justify this serious issue. Even I can say, every word is heart touching and so pure..
All I can do..🙏..👏👏👏.👌👌..👍👍
@priya
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Thank you so much Prabhat 💜💜
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How, how u write so well??..🤔🙄..
@priya.
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I try.
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You did justice, I must say!
A very serious topic and I felt each and every single line.
This needs to be understood greatly..thanks for sharing your beautiful writing!.
Much love dear girl.
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I am honoured with your words D! Much love to you too ❤️❤️❤️
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😊😊
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Indeed justice was done!! You wrote on such a serious issue.. with pouring all your heart out.. well written priya👍
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Thank you so much Gourav. I tried.
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You always sounds amazing with your thought and words.. 💐💐👌
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Thank you Gourav. 💝💝
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An amazing and powerful piece. 🙂
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Thank you.
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Very deep and realistic! Thank you for writing about this, the crispy words that you’ve used are powerful enough to hit a person’s heart.
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Thank you Jyoti. I tried.
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This is powerful, great work!
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Thank you Tejasvi.
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Forgive me if I’m wrong, but is this about abortion? I like reading poetry because it makes me think and I like to try and interpret the authors meaning. I love writing but I am NO poet, that’s for sure lol
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Yes this is. I am also trying to write just an Amateur. Thank you for reading.
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It was so real and deep. Greatly written.
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Thank you.
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Heart breaking…
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It is.
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So sad and heart-breaking. The world seriously need to get some wisdom and stop making this hideous crime.
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If only. Sometimes it’s not what one wants.
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Sorry, I didnt get you by the above statement.
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Sometimes committing this crime is not a person wants but it have to be done.
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Wanting something and doing something else always have disastrous result.
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Indeed.
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