Small boy of five
Frightened
Scared
Hiding In corner
Closed eyes
Hands on ears
Still he hears
Slaps and screams
His father on his mother
Helpless he stares
In blank
Silently crying
Whispering prayers
To end it all.
A boy of ten,
His mother no more
It’s killing him
To be under the same roof
A murderer
His father?
Or a Devil
Penetrating him
And his soul
Weeping
In hushing tone
He prays
Oh lord
How much more?
A boy of fifteen,
His face agleam
Drunkard father
Threw him on the floor
Not crying now
Not anymore
He see her
His mother
He hears those
Her screams
Picking up the smashed glass
Killed the devil
Free was his soul
Blood on his hands
Freedom on his mind
Closing the doors
He ran
He ran
He ran
Till he reached the shore,
Run, Jasper
You have to,
In the darkness
He ran alone.
Waking up
In a shudder
A man,
Holding a gun
Fear in his eyes
Memories still haunts him
But he know
He did rise,
Away from the Shadows
Carrying a rose
With a Gun
He walks
People run
Still sometimes
Afraid of the dark
Still he walks
On a thorny path
He loves that child
On the street
Plays with him
Whenever he meet,
This face of that man
Nobody have seen
That five year old
Is still within
But
Fear now fears him
Yes
For he is now
Jasper, The Black Thorn Klein.
The Lost Soul.
PS: So this is prequel to my earlier poem, Jasper the black thorn Klein, my first fictional character. if you want to read the earlier one you can read it Here
So for a change This Lost Soul, Wrote something that’s not related to love. Haha. Hope you will like this.
This is so emotional, and you expressed it so good. It’s the best among all i’ve read till now, and i’ll share this.
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Thank you Sid. After long time huh. Good to see you 😊
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Hey i was busy struggling with my own life. Well I did post new blogs, check it out? 😄❤️
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Life keeps everyone busy.
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So gripping and you are so talented, how you convey emotions and make us feel every word. Xo ♥️. Beautiful my dear sister.
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Thank you so very much angel ❤️❤️❤️
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very well written Priya. you always come up with something good.
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Thank you Sid.
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quite a post not just a post but an eye-catchin’ story u have come up with. kinda like the layout esp. the way how thoroughly it’s written with such a deep-yet-deepen frequency of generous thoughts. anybody can easily relate this picturesque lockdown “prequel” to their realistic life.
looking forward to check out its 1st part, shortly.
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I am glad you found it eye catching sweetheart.
Would love to read your insights on the first one too
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Wow!!!!!!! That’s bombastic and coolest poem I have ever read. Just loved the way you used timeline to narrate his story. Kudos to you!!!!
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My goodness. Rk I was waiting for you so badly to read this and this compliment made me smile 😍
Thank you so very much
It’s because of you I thought of writing this. And making more parts of it.
❤️❤️
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I’m overwhelmed Priya. Thank you so much, I just love your Jasper series and this piece is just way too classy..Now I need to read first part again…
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Thank you again dearest.
Thank you for asking me to write on it too. I am glad you did that’s why I thought of it.
❤️❤️
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That’s so sweet of you.
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Wow❤️
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Hey love Thank you.
Do read the earlier Jasper too.
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I already did 🌼
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Much love ❤️
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I’ve been waiting to see this. See I knew you could do it!
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Thank you so much Braeden.
It was going on in my mind from long. I am thinking to write more about Jasper.
Thank you so much.
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Welcome!
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Wow, this was such a POWERFUL piece. You must’ve really poured your heart and soul into it. Fantastic!
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Thank you Mark, It was in my mind from long, just gave words to it.
Thank you so very much.
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You, the exquisite one, have a deep mind. That is what I’ve awaited, and Jasper’s story, now that it is out and about, will make for further fascinating reading. Yes, instead of love, you address its lack.
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I am beaming cheeks to cheek reading your words.
I will work on Jasper more.
I write love and lack of it because I had and lost it.
But that’s what I mostly get inspired from.
Thank you again. 💜💜
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You can write anything and it will be amazing. But, I had to read this more than two times. It is so powerful. So painful and beautiful.
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Thank you Thank you so much Tatjana
Your words are encouraging. ❤️❤️
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This is really good! Couldn’t stop reading
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You knew Jasper Right?
Thank you Jay ❤️
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Actually I’m not sure about Jasper
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Read, the earlier one then.
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Okay, this is your best I believe.
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Now that hurts as well as makes me happy 😉😉😉
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Speechless now I am.
But I love your writings.
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Haha
I love you too ❤️❤️❤️
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I like it
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I like you.❤️❤️❤️
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😚 ♥
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❤️😘😘
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Wow while reading I felt like I am watching some thriller movie. This is amazingly written. ❤️
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Thank you dear.
I hope you read the earlier Jasper too, he is an interesting personality. 💜💜
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Beautifully written Priya, this is what’s called talent 🙂
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Awww Soiba. Thank you so much for your words. This means a lot.
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A fresh departure from your writings of love. 🙂 this was powerful. Both the parts depict the pain of the character so beautifully done. Kudos Priya ❤
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Thank you S.
so very much. Your words means a lot.
Yes, I thought to give love a break…I am glad people are liking him.
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Break is necessary at times 🙂 I loved it Priya ❤
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Love back at you Sameera. You are a sweetheart. ❤️
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Aye..! you are more sweet. 🙂
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Sweetness back at you Hun 😘😘
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I love fiction, it gives me a good place to escape. I love the character
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Thank you S.
Do read the first part, you might love him too. ❤️❤️
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Not yet but I’m going to! In appreciation of you ❤️
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❤️❤️
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Like this? I TOTALLY LOVE IT. It is different in its own kind of way and most interesting as well. Keep it up girl!!!!
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Thank you so very much dear Akeela.
Much love to you ❤️
Do read Jasper, you might love his personality 😉
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On to it dear and keep up the good work
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Beautiful 🌷
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Thank you so much
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You’re most welcome 😊
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I laughed when Shefali said let’s give love a break! She has a point, we often need a moment to catch our breath. Before plunging right back into the warm, wanton depths of our favourite inspiration.
But, oh – you can funnel feeling into any genre, sweet Priya, and have us all hanging on every line. I will search for Jasper online again, for as time wears on your story telling of him is bound to go as viral as my admiration for you ❤
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I do too. Though, love is the inspiration that’s always on my door to pick.
And I tried before. And I tried now. Your words are encouraging. I am waiting for Jasper to tell more of him.
May be I would Write Jasper in love too.
See, this is what I do. Connect everything to love.
Haha.
You are sweetest HoneyBee.
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Sugarplum, he is completely intriguing. It will be nice to follow him closely on whatever you conjure for him. I like serialised work, though it seems to take a lot of effort.
Haha, of course he will fall in love. Just hope he is not an ass 😉
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Hahaha He won’t be an ass for sure.
I will try to work on him.
It will take efforts but I have you to hold my hand 😊😊
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That you shall always have Priya … my promise 💕🌷
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Love ❤️❤️❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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This is a different sort of writing for you, but of course you are amazing at it. This character, poor boy/man, tortured… very dark and haunting, and very moving. I love your writing! 🙂
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Did you read the one I wrote earlier?
Thank you so much. I thought to give love a little break.
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I did, but I need to read it again.
Love is good all the time. Writing about it… Okay. Just this once. Lol
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Then you must, Jasper isn’t that poor in that 🤣
Umm. Okay. I want to write or not, love often finds me somewhere and make me write about it, hahaha😂
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I will read Jasper again!
Love makes us write about it, to keep us happy and sane.
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Love does it yes.
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Yes. 😊
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This was incredible to read. Intensely gut-wrenching and full of anguish, but also a glimmer of hope near the end. Profound ❤
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Thank you so very much my dear friend.. ❤️❤️
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This is wonderful, love.
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Thank you so much Sarah. Your words means a lot to me.❤️❤️
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Well, this was…… different.
I meant that in a nice way. So it turns out that you’re quite versatile too haha :’)
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Hehehe
I guess I am. Thank you S 😍😍😍
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Interestingly dark and beautifully written…. You are quite good at this genre…. Let us give love a break cuz I desperately need a daily dose of this…..<3 ❤
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Hahaha. Oh dear girl, love often finds me 😂😂
Will try more, for sure. Thank you beautiful for reading.
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well written. Morbidly dark and moving at the same time. I feel for the boy. Glad he got justice…
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Hi Thank you Joseph for reading.
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