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Let’s Be Friends?


Hello anybody there?
I am suffocating here
It’s been long you see
Inside here
I can’t move
I can’t breathe
I can’t shift
It’s choking
I am not joking.
I need to go out
To see the world
To hear, to talk
To shout
I screech here
Oh boy!
They don’t hear
Sometimes they do
But then they are scared
And run in thin air
I don’t understand
Why are they frightened
I am just a kid
Isn’t that allowed
To talk
Make friends?
It’s been a long time
I haven’t made any
They left me here
I am waiting and waiting
The clock is
Clicking and clicking
I have no friend
Is this the end?
Ah! Here comes someone
I will make friends with him
I don’t want to be alone
It’s been long you see
Almost years twenty five.
Here, lying alone
A child so naïve
I was just five
I had dark eyes
I begged them not too
Oh I didn’t know, I was dead.
Then they
Leaving me here
Under the ground,
In this box
My toy I kept close
To my chest.
They the one I loved
A long time ago,
Buried me here
Deep inside,
Now I will
Take your leave,
For now I have company
But if ever you want to
Please be my guest,
Here I lay,
A child
Not so in peace
In the nearest graveyard
I rest.

The Lost Soul.

PS: Hello everyone, here I am with something different again. I don’t know till how much time I could be apart from my love inspiration, haha but Till then I hope you like what I am writing & I am sorry for missing your blogs, I will catch up in few days. Lots of love.


The Lost Soul.



A simple one with complicated thought process ..I write to seek answers, I write to seek what is missing. I write because it makes me calm. I write because I am not completely lost,not yet found. I, am wandering. Writing comes naturally, in the heat of most passionate moments, either of happiness or utter sadness.

112 thoughts on “Let’s Be Friends?

  1. Hi priya,
    I have been really lost lately, off wordpress, off work, off life basically, but when I come back, and I find this wonderful post which I resonate to so badly right now, I am really happy, and I cannot express how much I relate to this right now, and how even more your post expresses my feelings too 🙂

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  2. It was sad and dark, but you wrote it so well! Loneliness and pain, and the sting of rejection, being expressed as death, even in a child. Especially in a child! I like how you’re branching out and exploring other feelings. Your words make me think and feel! Perfect. 🙂

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    1. And your words make me smile. I look forward for your words. I am trying to give love a backseat, though it want to drive time and again. Let’s see till
      Then it will stay away from the wheel.
      Thank you sweetest ❤️

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      1. You’re welcome! I love that you’re challenging yourself with your writing. Your love poetry is really good, though… but everything you write is good. ❤

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  3. This is soo well expressed, at some points i was able to relate which the boy you describe. Everyone walks thru that phase, at some point of time. It’s just keeping your shit together, and have faith, cause one day, it’ll change.
    I loved reading this, and will definitely read thru all your blog until you publish the next.

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  4. I like this Priya more, I’m just loving the way your’re exploring different genre in the most fantastic way. And this poem actually reminds me of Pink Floyd, you have written it exactly like the way they did.

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  5. I’ve decided to spend some time seated by the mossy,crumbled gravestone of this boy. I’ll light a little candle and read him some Lost Soul poetry, and he will be as moved as I am sweet Priya. For how can anyone feel alone as they immerse themselves in your writing. So warm and full of wondrous feel. Hugs from her, sugar plum 💓💓💓

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  6. I’d be honored to ❤😂.
    On a serious note, this was such an emotional read. You’re mastering every genre flawlessly, keep at it.
    And on a lighter note, congratulations on your 1k followers. That’s quite a huge number and I’m happy for you ❤

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