Hello anybody there?
Anyone?
Please!
I am suffocating here
It’s been long you see
Inside here
I can’t move
I can’t breathe
I can’t shift
It’s choking
Hey!
Listen
I am not joking.
I need to go out
To see the world
To hear, to talk
To shout
I screech here
Oh boy!
They don’t hear
Sometimes they do
Though
But then they are scared
And run in thin air
I don’t understand
Why are they frightened
I am just a kid
Isn’t that allowed
To talk
Make friends?
It’s been a long time
I haven’t made any
They left me here
I am waiting and waiting
The clock is
Clicking and clicking
I have no friend
Is this the end?
Ah! Here comes someone
I will make friends with him
I don’t want to be alone
Anymore
It’s been long you see
Almost years twenty five.
Here, lying alone
A child so naïve
I was just five
I had dark eyes
I begged them not too
Oh I didn’t know, I was dead.
Then they
Left
Leaving me here
Under the ground,
In this box
My toy I kept close
To my chest.
They the one I loved
A long time ago,
Buried me here
Deep inside,
Now I will
Take your leave,
For now I have company
But if ever you want to
Talk,
Please be my guest,
Here I lay,
A child
Not so in peace
In the nearest graveyard
I rest.
The Lost Soul.
PS: Hello everyone, here I am with something different again. I don’t know till how much time I could be apart from my love inspiration, haha but Till then I hope you like what I am writing & I am sorry for missing your blogs, I will catch up in few days. Lots of love.
Yours
The Lost Soul.
Oh love. This is gorgeous. I’ve really missed your words. Sorry for falling behind.
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Awww it’s alright love ❤️❤️❤️
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Beautiful 💛💛
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Thank you Akriti ❤️
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Welcome
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WOW….just wow
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Thank you Tanishq for stopping by and appreciating. Means a lot.
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Love this. Powerful and simple 👌
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Thank you so much for appreciating.
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This is beautifully written ❤❤
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Thank you so much ❤️❤️
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You’re welcome. You have such a talent! ❤
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I am honoured with your words ❤️❤️❤️
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WOW! This was intense! Fantastic writing! You are so talented!😍
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Much love Dani ❤️
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Much love to you too, sweetheart!💙💛💖💚💜
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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😘🤗
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Beautifully and subtly written.. lonely soul’..💓👌
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Thank you Hiral ❤️
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I really wish to ease your pain and scars. You are a beautiful soul rather than a lost soul to me. And truly a stunning writer!
Loads of love and kisses.
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Love back to you D.
Pain and scar are helping me to move ahead.
Thank you for being here ❤️
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Hi priya,
I have been really lost lately, off wordpress, off work, off life basically, but when I come back, and I find this wonderful post which I resonate to so badly right now, I am really happy, and I cannot express how much I relate to this right now, and how even more your post expresses my feelings too 🙂
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Priya. Is this your pic?? You have grey eyes
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This is my pik, no they are brown. 😊😊
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Catty eyes
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Hehehe 😍 people in my school say the same 😊😊
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😁😁
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💜💜💜
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It was sad and dark, but you wrote it so well! Loneliness and pain, and the sting of rejection, being expressed as death, even in a child. Especially in a child! I like how you’re branching out and exploring other feelings. Your words make me think and feel! Perfect. 🙂
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And your words make me smile. I look forward for your words. I am trying to give love a backseat, though it want to drive time and again. Let’s see till
Then it will stay away from the wheel.
Thank you sweetest ❤️
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You’re welcome! I love that you’re challenging yourself with your writing. Your love poetry is really good, though… but everything you write is good. ❤
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Awww Aren’t you the sweetest 😍😍😍😍 Always so kind to me.
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You’re kind and inspirational, Priya… so I have to say something. And your writing is good, heartfelt!
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Love ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Wonderful. So unexpected by the title
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Hii Thank you for stopping by and giving time to appreciate.
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I’ll definitely continue to stop 😘
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Awwww.
What’s your name? If you don’t mind?
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Wow! I was left speechless reading this, the pain you felt is evident in your writing. Loved it 💕
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Thank you love.
❤️
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Your welcome 🌸
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Sent you a mail dear
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I replied 😁😁
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What a beautiful perspective from which to write. Your creativity is inspiring, lovely 🙂 ❤
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Thank you so much love ❤️
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All my pleasure, lovely 🙂 ❤
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❤️❤️❤️
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Nicely done
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Thank you Braeden
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Awesome! Your words are simply poetry in motion; it’s fluidity tugs at my emotional strings every time I read your posts. Thanks for sharing!
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Your words always make me smile Mark. Thank you so very much for always appreciating.
💜💜
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I can’t catch the flow of poem
But as I found
It was all about the loneliness
A situation when a person find emptiness, loneliness in his/her life and no one is there to help him.
Perfectly written
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Thank you Shubhankar, I just tried to express the emotions of someone who left this world a little too early.
Thank you for reading 💜
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You know, you are treasured, as if you were my own child. Arizona will always welcome you.
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Awww this made my day. I am more than blessed. Thank you so so much. I hope I would visit you one day 💜
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No matter what you’re writing about, you do it well love 💜
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Awwww so much love Laken ❤️❤️❤️
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The mixture of innocence and the struggle to live, pretty awesome!!
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Thank you Kalyan. It was a struggle
To live after death 😂
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This is soo well expressed, at some points i was able to relate which the boy you describe. Everyone walks thru that phase, at some point of time. It’s just keeping your shit together, and have faith, cause one day, it’ll change.
I loved reading this, and will definitely read thru all your blog until you publish the next.
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Thank you so much Siddharth.
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Killer just a killer. The loneliness of a carcass. What a topic to write on👍👍
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I tried dear friend. Thank you 😊
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I did not try, you did😉
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Aww. Haha. Thank you
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You’re most welcome dear🌷
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This is so dark and haunting especially I read it past midnight!
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Haha thank you Anand, I hope you had a good sleep.
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Yes, I had. You’re welcome and have a great day ahead, Priya 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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I like this Priya more, I’m just loving the way your’re exploring different genre in the most fantastic way. And this poem actually reminds me of Pink Floyd, you have written it exactly like the way they did.
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Wow. I am honoured. Well, I don’t know till when this Priya will be here, but hey I am trying. Thank you Rk ❤️
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Stay here Priya, tusi na jao 😃
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Hahaha Now I will not Rk 😁😁💜
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Hahaha 😂😁😀💜
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This is really different… and a bit nightmar-ish… 😜🤗
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Haha Thank you B ❤️
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I’ve decided to spend some time seated by the mossy,crumbled gravestone of this boy. I’ll light a little candle and read him some Lost Soul poetry, and he will be as moved as I am sweet Priya. For how can anyone feel alone as they immerse themselves in your writing. So warm and full of wondrous feel. Hugs from her, sugar plum 💓💓💓
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Awwww Diana you are love ❤️❤️❤️ your words made me smile ear to ear. Here I am beaming. You are my constant and I will be there too forever.
Hugs.
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I’m so thrilled with our eternal friendship, for it’s set in stone that’s impervious to time and geography! Have a divine evening sweet one
❣️♥️❣️♥️
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Have a great weekend ahead honey bee. I fill with joy and happiness seeing you on my posts. Your name is enough to make me smile and happy.
Love ❤️
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🌹😍🌹
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❤️❤️
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🌸💜💜🌸
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Wow, this is beautiful. ❤
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Hey Maddy thank you ❤️
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Poignantly written, loved it 🙂
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Thank you Soiba ❤️
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Oooh dark! I like it very much!!
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Arbie where have you been? Miss you.
Thank you ❤️
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With a world this old , certainly stories like this happened. Poor child , and poor mother.
I like it Priya. 😍
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Thank you Novus ❤️❤️
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wow, a powerful ride of emotions. Well done!
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Thank you Neha ❤️
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Beautiful 👌👌
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Haha thank you Gourav 💜
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Nice to see you with a good laugh. Compliment was for both, your work as well as you 😋😋
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Awww Thank you Gouri. I am trying different genres. 💜
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From so many days I was thinking to translate one of your work in hindi again.. this one is looks promising as per my capabilities 😊😊
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Awww haha. That will be fun to read.wow. I can’t wait 😍❤️
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I will share it to you, only if I would be able to translate it in the same essence as it is in English. ☺️
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You will definitely I am sure.😊😊
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I’d be honored to ❤😂.
On a serious note, this was such an emotional read. You’re mastering every genre flawlessly, keep at it.
And on a lighter note, congratulations on your 1k followers. That’s quite a huge number and I’m happy for you ❤
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Thank you so much S.
🙈🙈 I have a post pending on 1k followers 😁 Thank you so very much
For being constant ❤️
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I do have. hahaaa
Well this was the voice of the soul burried and was on such an emotional note.
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Its scheduled in 2035…
hope till then I get that.
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Aww thank you Shreya 💜
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Quite a storyline u have come up with. The ideology of “life w/ & w/o friends” is nicely grasped in suchness of words.
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An attempt. Thank you.
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