All the while, when you were deeply dissolved in your thoughts, and those fluttery feelings, you never realised, the love is lost and it is long gone.
All the while, when you were lost in the alluring dreams about the things that make you happy, the person who brought that curve on your lips, your emotions foreshadows that those things aren’t there anymore and that someone has left you to suffer.
All the while you were busy in visualising the pleasing future, the present was getting destroyed, the one you considered your future with was busy in creating this endless torment and the torture.
All the while, you were in love with lies, exquisite, pretty Fabrications.
All the while, you were flying on a cloud of Deceits.
All the while, when you were waiting for the flowers to blossom, the storm was approaching, and the budding flowers were laying on the ground, dead.
All the while, you didn’t noticed that you lost and you fell. Nothing in this world can bring you more down than this shattered piece of your heart.
All the while, you my dear wasn’t being loved, but was played by arresting eyes, beguiling smiles, and magnificent lies, enchanting dreams.
All the while,
A breathtaking Dream was becoming grasping for breathes Nightmare.
The Lost Soul.
Hey! Another lost soul here. It hits me. I love it. It inspires me to write more about my experiences and my inner thoughts. It was so lovely 🙂
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Hey there thank you for stopping by and giving time to appreciate. Your words means a lot.
Definitely, you must write what you feel. Raw emotions are best portrayed.
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A powerful outcry of emotions. Beautifully written dear.
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Thank you Hon! ❤️
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Pleasure darling.
Keep writing keep motivating ❤
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Always love ❤️❤️
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I can feel your words.
And I can relate to the last one. It touched my heart ❤❤
Loved this. Wonderful.
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Thank you S!! ❤️❤️
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And all these shall make way for a beautiful treasure left undiscovered yet…that treasure being the path to rediscover yourself all over again…😘
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Like you read my heart and put it in words. Lots of love K! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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😘😘
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It’s mind blowing and also the blunt truth which is hard to digest.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and taking time to comment. Right, this is the truth now a days.
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🙂 you’re most welcome!
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💖💖💖
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😘😘
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Nice one, Priya! But sorry you had to go through it!
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Somewhere somehow we all went through a little heart break, Don’t we?
Thank you so much
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Well, ya but, hey, it gives us something to write about!
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Definitely!!! 😁
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Are you watching my life? This was really relatable! Wow! Bloody good writing too! 💖
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All of us at one time or other have gone through this, didn’t we?
Thank you so much ❤️❤️
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You have a wonderful blog Arbie. I checked some of the posts there.
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😲👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍
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☺️☺️
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Great 😊 please read this poem https://bleedingthoughtsweb.com/2017/10/24/the-day-you-left/
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A Cinderella turned into a vampire..you did not notice this metamorphosis. It did not happen overnight, it was the consequence of deceit combined with my unprecedented love for you which transformed me into blood sucking monster.
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A nice touch Siddhartha.
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I am still learning the nuances Priya. You are my monster… sorry my master😁😁😁
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Haha you are a wonderful writer
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I love the feelings that you pour into your writing. You can feel it in every word you write. Beautiful, yet tormented almost.
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Thank you sweet ❤️ when your heart is full of pain, it deep through words. Yet I try, I am glad you like it.
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You’re welcome 💜 And well, writing is a good way to get those thoughts and feelings out.
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Exactly!
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Feels darling! You’re exquisite heart bleeds beautifully on the pale canvas! 😍
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Thank you Mel for you are a sweetheart Not just having a sweet heart but a heart which is full of sweetness, if that make any sense. ❤️❤️❤️
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😘
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This is heartbreaking, Priya. It laments the fact that you never really know if you can trust someone, even after years, with your heart, with your soul, with your secrets… Loved this!
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Thank you, it is true we never really see beyond the beautiful picture, the pain, the painter may be going through is always kept hidden behind the beautiful canvas (s)he drew. We never really know.
Thank you so much ❤️
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❤
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❤️❤️
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❤❤❤!
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Our lives are never really what they seem to be, especially for us creative dreamers (visionaries)
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True indeed my friend ☺️
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All the while… I was applauding at the variety and exquisite feeling in EVERYTHING you write! ❤️ I can feel you getting stronger as you gain more insight in life through writing.
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I am always trying to find something.
And see I found you too here, you are such a Darling ❤️❤️ Thank you for your kind and encouraging words as always love.
And you missed my last post and I can’t miss your thoughts on that. 😘😘😘 whenever you have time kindly go through it. ❤️❤️
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Ahh my poor oxford dictionary!! Now it’s back in my service again. New word searched “beguiling” ..
again a great work priya!! As you always used to do.
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Haha Thank you my dear friend!!
❤️❤️
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Even I did not know..😁😁
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😁😁
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This is toooo good….
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Is it??
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Yes, it has quite universal appeal.
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Thank you so much dear one😍
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My pleasure
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💜💜
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💟
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This is great!
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❤️❤️
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“All the while, you my dear wasn’t being loved, but was played by arresting eyes, beguiling smiles, and magnificent lies, enchanting dreams.”
The above lines got me. I can relate with this and it’s not a palatable feel. But such is life and love that is cloaked in lies and deception. This was a great share. 🙂
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It is not at all a palatable one, I can bet!
Indeed it is life. Thank you for reading and giving time to comment ❤️❤️
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Welcome! Tell me about it… It’s the most pernicious experience. I’ve been down that road before and it wasn’t an easy fate. God help us. 🙂
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